Folks,
I wrote for http://www.gamedev.net and would like to request your
review. I'm looking for critique and suggestions on language, grammar,
ease of reading the article, etc. Of course you are welcome to point
out any other mistakes as well.
The article can be found at http://wagerlabs.com/w/PowerStrip
I should warn that this article is NOT realated to Lisp but I thought
that it might be interesting to the Lisp community. It's also targeted
at people unfamiliar with Erlang. Flame away!
Thanks, Joel
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